You would not believe what had happened to her. What 0n earth could the picture of the book turn up as a real figure by itself. Ok wait, let me explain to you. Of course, she was warned to take care of that book very carefully, but how could it be possible? Here is the TRUE story.
When the weather was extremely hot, a girl who was named Melissa, sprinted to the library near by Neitherfield. She loves to read books. The first thing that she did after waking up from her bed was hopping to the library which was situated near her house. However, that day, the library was totally changed. It was neither clean nor new. It was not the library that she usually went to. She blew up all the floating dust around the library. She tiptoed on the window. There was on bearded old man glancing at her. No one was reading or sitting in that library except for the old man. The old man waved Melissa to come in. She stepped inside carefully.
"Which book are you looking for, dear?" asked the old man with cracking voice.
"I......I need a fiction-book." mumbled Melissa.
"The fiction books are listed over there on the third bookself. You can also borrow them."
Melissa was really confused. Where is the library that Melissa usually went to? Melissa started to search a book with curiosity. As she looked around, she discovered an enormous book at the corner of the bookself. It was twice bigger than a normal book. The title was "The Spirits of the Trees".
"Oh, I found a great one! This was the book that I was looking for!" exclaimed Melissa.
As on bearded old man noticed the book that Melissa was going to borrow, he was perplexed.
"Oh, dear, this book is a bit......,"said an old man and ceased. After few minutes, he suddenly shouted delightfully.
"Ok, well! Good! I knew that this book would be borrowed by someone in someday because this book has not been borrowed for many years! This book will be very astonishing. However, there is one thing that you should remind when you read this book. Do not just sleep when the book is being opened. I said DO NOT," warned an old man.
Melissa thought that an old man was a bit weird and extraordinary. Anyways, she promised not to sleep with the opened book. After arriving at her house, she totally forgot the promise.
"Phew...that old man was really scary," sighed Melissa. She lied down on her bed and started to read over. The book was really astonishing and fascinating. However, she fell asleep with the opened book. Suddenely, the house started to shake extremely and the trees on the book turned up. Melissa was just getting to her feet without a word. She didn't know what had happened. She was neither in her bed nor her house. She was in totally different world that she had never visited before. She realized that she was standing in the middle of the forest with the book. There was a sign posted in front of the entrance. In a few second, she knew that she was in "Trees' World".
It was all green. Nothing was in that area. Only trees. Only trees were existing. Yet, trees were too sensitive. They neglected Melissa entering in Trees' World because humans have been destroying and cutting them violently. All trees started to shake and move towards Melissa. She sprinted as fast as she could. Despite of her trying, she was caught by trees. They squeezed Melissa's body with their stamps. She was about to pass out. Fortunately, she wiped the piece of paper of book. She was in her room with an opened book.
Wow!!! Great story! I loved your transition sentence, and it was great how you described about people, objects, and places. I would like to see some great or strong beganing sentence. Even though, your sentence did not grab me/reader, but it's not bad, so just work on it a little bit more, put some effert & time, and you will be strong writer!
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